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Star wars fanfic: Stand Alone 2.0 chapter 2

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Note: Please read chapter 1 of this story before moving on Chapter 1

Echo and Tech walk towards the market district.

 "I've never been on this planet Before ,I thought it was destroyed." Said Echo.
 
           Tech turned to Echo.
"Well it was not destroyed completely, according to history archives the planet was restored." Said Tech.
 
Echo playfully punched Tech on the shoulder and said "Your just full of info."
 
 Tech pointed to the Jedi walking down the street and Said "Look there they are."
 
"Stay here, I'll go get the team." Said Echo.
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Hunter walked into the Havoc Marauder's cockpit and saw Revan standing at the door staring at it.
 
 "What's the matter Revan?" Asked Hunter as he walked into the cockpit.
 
 Revan turned to Hunter and said  "I'm worried about Echo and I don't know why."

Hunter walked in front of Revan and put a hand on her shoulder.

"It's okay to worry about your teammates Revan." Said Hunter.
 
Revan looked away from Hunter and blushed.

 Suddenly Echo burst in the door.

   "See?" Said as he gestured to Echo.
 
Hunter walked back into the crew cabin to get his gear.

" Commander! We've found them! Said Echo

            Revan Turned to Echo.
 "Good, but why didn't you use your comlink?" Asked Revan.

        Echo Made a embarrassed face. "Well I-" he began.
 
        But Revan cut him off and said " Whatever, there's no time to waste!"
 
           She rushed off to get the team ready.
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Revan and The Bad Batch arrived at the abandoned Hotel building right off the Market District.

Revan signaled Echo to open the door then pulled out her blasters and aimed at the entrance.

Echo opened the door and Revan and her team went inside with their weapons draw.

"Hunter your with me, Crosshair, Echo, search the west wing of the hotel. Wrecker, Tech, go to the east." Ordered Revan.
 
The team did what they were told.

Revan and Hunter ran up the stairs to the first room and opened the door.

They looked around the room, Revan saw one of the Jedi sleeping. she walked up to the bed and pulled off the covers to confirm the target. She aims her blaster at his head and pulls the

trigger killing him. Two of the other Jedi came out from the shadows with their lightsabers.
 
Revan pulled out her vibro blade and clashed with the two Jedi. She killed the male Jedi

and blocked an attack from the female Jedi. She grabbed the female Jedi's wrist and squeezed so hard that she dropped her lightsaber.
 
Revan kicked her down to the floor and held her at sword point.

  "I have a question for you." Said Revan.

The female Jedi looked up at Revan with fear and said "Why should I tell a monster in a mask anything?"

"Because you could be spared." Said Revan.

"Fine," the female Jedi gulped loudly "I'll answer your question."
 
"Where's Ahsoka Tano?" asked Revan.
 
The female Jedi replied "She's on Onderon."

Hunter walked up to Revan's side and said "At least she told us."

Revan put her vibrosword away and said "Thank you."

The female Jedi looked relieved when Revan turned to walk away, as she did she pulled out her

blaster and fired a single shot killing the girl.

Hunter looked surprised and said "Whoa, Revan you-"

Revan cut him off "We had orders to kill them Hunter, I did what I was told." 

She turned on her comlink and spoke into it. "Bad Batch, the mission is over, return to the ship."  
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At the Havoc Marauder...

Hunter was sitting alone in his small room. There wasn't much in his room just a bed and

small bolted down nightstand, of course it was a small ship so there wasn't any room for anything.
 
How could Revan do that? I know we had orders to...but still. thought Hunter.

Then there was a knocking at the door, Hunter got up to answer it.

It was Echo... "What is it Echo?" asked Hunter.

"Can I come in?" Asked Echo.

"Yeah." Said Hunter.

Echo walked in the room and closed the door.

"I heard about what happened with the girl and Revan." Said Echo.

"I never thought Revan would do that, but I guess I forgot that she's just like the Empire and the Sith." Said Hunter as he ran his fingers thru his hair.

"Your wrong Hunter, there's  a good reason why she blindly killed that girl." Said Echo.

"Why?" Asked Hunter, "She had been brainwashed and I think she's my sister. It's too hard to tell now." Said Echo. Hunter walked backwards a few steps. "What?" Said Hunter.

"You said she died in the Clone Wars." Said Hunter. "I know what I said Hunter, but when I first saw Revan come on the ship, I swear she looked just like Cora but with short hair." Said Echo.

"But you still don't know Echo, she just could be a look alike." Warned Hunter.

"Think about it Hunter, she doesn't have any records of her history, family, or homeworld." Said Echo. "The Empire is hiding something, and I don't like it."

Hunter looked at Echo for a second then said "Okay, let's say you're right, let's say Revan is really

your sister." Echo looked like he was ready for any question Hunter was about to throw at him.

"How are you going to tell her? Are you just going to walk up and say your my sister?" Asked Hunter.

"No, I'm going to make sure she gets to Ahsoka." Said Echo.
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Onderon...
Ahsoka Tano was in Lux Bontari's home looking thru some Holocrons she was able to grab from the Jedi Temple.

 It's been years since Order 66 and she need to know if Anakin made it if only...

"Lost in thoughts again?" Said a voice behind her, she turned to see Lux holding a cup of tea.

"Yeah, I just keep thinking of Anakin,  I wonder what happened to him." Said Ahsoka.

"Well, there's no point in worrying about him at this moment." Said Lux. as he put the cup on the table. 
 
 "I know but all I could find is this message from Obi-Wan and-" Ahsoka said but Lux cut her off.

 "Ahsoka, I know your worried about him and I'm sure he's okay but you have to take it easy." Said Lux "Your right Lux, I have to take it easy." Said Ahsoka. She hugged him and he hugged back.
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Please don't read this until you've read this chapter because there are major spoilers ahead.
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Okay this was a really hard chapter to write I don't know how many times I re-wrote some of the scenes in this chapter like the scene with Echo and Hunter.
But I really had fun writing the Ahsoka and Lux scene, in the next chapter Ahsoka and Revan will have some kind of showdown.
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